I liked his ideas was that you can be with the objects that are in the outside. That way you can interact with nature. I like that a lot. Because that way you start to take more care about it and recycle more things..etc..Maybe in the future you would have a computer that going to be introduce to you. and it is going to be much easier. This will helped all the epeople that interact with the technology.
For me the phrase open source it means that liberate your minds. I say thus because his innovation is going to make you stay in the outside of the room and see more nature be more liberate from the dark room with the computer etc. This invitation will helped the humans to do a step to be more intelligent and take care of our world. That what i think he tries to say with the phrase open source.
Okay, in my opinion I think the body of the text is well composed. However, I noticed several grammar mistakes, little ones, perhaps you typed too fast. I will have to disagree with you in the fact that with this technology you don't really interact with nature. With this said, I always disagree with you in the fact that we start to recycle, seriously why did you think that?. In conclusion, taking out all the mistakes, I think you would agree with me in the fact that this technology indeed will revolutionize the world
ResponderEliminarPedro I agree with your essay but you need to make it longer. I think you didn't mention as much as could have. There is a lot of information in the video that you can talk about. I know there are many things you can talk about this topic.
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You said a few things that caught my attention. Although, i didn't think the graphics where very good at all. They were a little bit hard to see. That must be something that they will have to fix more in the future. The idea was a very good one i agree. But in what part of the video did they say it was to recycle or interact with nature? That has nothing to do with it. They said only that it was to combine the physical world with the technological world.
ResponderEliminarHello Pedro Pablo, while I was reading your post I found many many spelling and grammatical mistakes. I think you should focus more on your posts or re-read them. You have a good opinion in your mind but I think you should express it better.
ResponderEliminarYou really need to work on your spelling. Your idea about the video was excellent. You just have to re-read your work after you have finished it. You never really answered all of the questions that were asked to be answered. Good job, but work on your grammar.
ResponderEliminarPedro Pablo You have really good ideas. I guess you could write more because there were much more things that are really impressive. Watch out for grammar and spelling. Good job (:
ResponderEliminarI agree with what you said. What the video showed us something new and impressive. Although you had a lot of grammatical and spelling mistakes, your opinion was good. I agree that you just don't have to stay inside your house using your computer. I do think that we should go outside more often. This was my opinion on your opinion. Keep it like this! Just fix your grammatical and spelling mistakes.
ResponderEliminarOk Nacho, nice try but try better next time! Really, you are telling Thomas he has a great spelling and grammar while yours isn't that good.. I think you should REALLY proof read your work. Still, I really liked your ideas. People should spend more time in the outside so you get to interact more with nature. Apart from the spelling and grammar mistakes, your paragraphs are pretty good. ☻
ResponderEliminarWell, Pedro. You are right. I mean, honestly it was very hard to read spanglish but you got the idea. Have you ever taken a grammar class? Dude, proofread! Well, any whay I think that you mainly like how this can easily mix with the real world. I love that as well. I hope that this technology keeps on evolving!
ResponderEliminarPedro: Your paragraph is a little complicated to read, due to the spelling and grammar mistakes; however it is a good composition. You are right about the good this technology will bring, plus is freaking asome. It will allow us to modify it life style. WE could move arround the streets with our computer with out having to stay at home or carry it.
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I also agree with what you are saying. Seems like lots of people ageree that technollogy have help us and its good, but ofcouse becausw we get so much used to it, later we wount know how to o things by our selfs. And you alsop got a point, you are trying rto priove that technollogy is good but you should get used to it. Everyday technology is getting more advasnced, holepy thats for good. We know how ro tranmite an image from one place to another but we do not know how to solve our own problems. See that technology doesnt solve all.
ResponderEliminarPedro: I agree with your essay , but its too brief! You need to give more details about it. You should try to give more facts about the video. Talk about what they were saying about the men who created the apparatous. I agree in the part you say that technology is very useful, everyone uses it. Watch out for spelling and grammar mistakes! But did a good job!
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