miércoles, 17 de noviembre de 2010

one day at the bay




day in the bay Pedro Pablo from mistermark on Vimeo.



1 comentario:

  1. Pedro Pablo:
    You did a god job on the assignment. You can see, that is a reflection of how you spend the day in Puerto Vallarta. I think thats really original. Another thing that I liked, is that the music, which fits the video well, was in coordination with the change of images. Also your video made the viewer (me) get my the attention really fast. Another thing is, your theme...simple but interesting. From the begging, we know that your theme is to show what is the live of a 15 year old boy in Puerto Vallarta. Their only two changes I would make to your video. The first one is to give more time to your credits, they passed really fast that it was imposable to read. My final change, would be to not put the picture of the hot lady in a bikini. Is not that its school appropriate, which I don't really care about, its just that it doesn't make connection with the video.
    Overall, Great Job

    Paco

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